Imaginary Planet Information Report
Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs. You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.
Living Things
Keywords
Aliens
Mashons
Humans
Topic sentence
The living things on Racico are weird.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
Aliens are amazing but they can be werid so they have four of every thing!
People sometimes run away from them because they look yucky and slimy, but there not!
Martians are cool, but on Racico there not.
They throw acid at anyone who is mean to them and they have there privite home where no one ever leaves them alown so they throw acid when ever they want to.
Sometimes they have acid fights!
The humans, from earth, have to were nothing!
Sometimes they even say ‘good beeing naked’.
Concluding sentence
So living things are cool on Racico.
Objects
Keywords
Disco bomb
Plants
Disco tree
Rockits
house
Topic sentence
On the planet, Racico, there are a heap of objects.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
The disco bomb makes anyone dance and groove.
There is no stopping dancing!
There are more plants on Racico.
There is a great old disco tree that lights up every time Mercury orbits around the sun (88 days).
It is always night when it lights up.
There are rockets that people ride crazy!
Is that weird? Well, here is something weirder!
The one, the only, the weird but protected house!
So people can be super protected in their house.
There is traps if your getting somewhere else like home.
There is acid pits and dispensers that shoot lava at people.
If people have been scanned to go in the house, they get teleported in.
To get out, people just knock on the door.
The people that are not scaned get teleported to their house until the traps are activaded.
When they are waitting, they are stuck in a glass cage with fake acid to scare them, if people have buyed it.
It cost 9999$ to get, and it is very usful but very expenstive, so save up!
Concluding sentence
So there are a lot of objects on Racico.
Bear Monsters
Keywords
God
Good
Bad
Topic sentence
The mean on earth but are nice on Racico
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
There is three types of bear monsters.
Lucky god, good and unlucky bad.
There is only one god and it controls the planet so every one is happy.
The good ones are the protecters of citys and towns incase the traps are no good.
The unlucky bad one has an army but no leader so they just attack when ever they want to.
They have lots of weapens to attack with, but they just take them.
Concluding sentence
The bears are mean still but good will win!
school
Keywords
No school
Lucky school
Topic sentence
There is one thing on Racico you can’t and can do.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)
School is boring because all you do is HAND WRITING!
Only the bad bears go to school if corrupted.
If kids get lucky to go to lucky school, kids get play time more often, kids get to do their favorite subject all of school time.
Concluding sentence
So school is the best but sometimes not.
