Thursday, September 28, 2017

Kyle Camp

On the trip we had a flat tyre.
Then we had another flat tyre.
The trip took like 50 hours and I was

Today was a great day!
I liked abseiling a little bit.
I was scared because it was a long way down and so high.

I am sad because I miss mum and Rory too.
I liked the free time because you got to chose what you want to do.

My favourite was the iron man because I got to run to the middle of the court.
The drive was the same.


Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Persuasive Writing

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:

New stuff at wet lunches.

At wet lunch times can we please have chromebooks for the following reasons.

First reason, we could finish up work.

Second we could make slideshows of learning.

Finley we could make new learning.

Wednesday, May 3, 2017

My Holiday Writing

My  brother Rory and I had loads of fun in the holidays. We had sleepovers in granny's bed in Rory's room. We used the tablet like a movie. Before we go to bed we like to play masher sonic.