Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Persuasive Writing

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing:

New stuff at wet lunches.

At wet lunch times can we please have chromebooks for the following reasons.

First reason, we could finish up work.

Second we could make slideshows of learning.

Finley we could make new learning.

Wednesday, May 3, 2017

My Holiday Writing

My  brother Rory and I had loads of fun in the holidays. We had sleepovers in granny's bed in Rory's room. We used the tablet like a movie. Before we go to bed we like to play masher sonic.